Ryuuga Uchiha

Name:Ryuuga Uchiha
Nickname:N.A.
Age:16
Gender:Male

Height:5'5"
Weight: 108lb
Appearance:Has neck-length messy hair that is black and has natural red eyes.He wears a plain black top with dark-blue colored jeans with blue sandals

Personality:Ryuuga usually has a cold,emotionless,un-caring look on his face as he has seen far too many deaths when he was young and those deaths has made him cold.While Ryuuga has an un-caring emotionless look on his face most of the time he actually enjoys helping people do difficult things and is willing to take up any mission or task given to him.He is also willing to risk his life for friends as he does not want to lose any more precious people close to him.

History:At the age of 12 Ryuuga had been away on a mission on the night of the Uchiha massacre as he returned home he was terrified to see all the dead Uchiha lying on the ground.He wandered the Uchiha compound aimlessly stumbling upon the scroll to the secrets of the Sharingan terrified by the thought of killing his best friend he quickly put the scroll back in and was gratefull that he had been away while the massacre had taken place.Aside from his history with the Uchiha massacre he was also known well in the academy by being near the top of his class in almost every lesson.When he first heard of the chunin exam he was not interested as he thought that ranks in a ninja system was useless as it was just a matter of who was stronger and who was weaker,who was more skilled who was less skilled,etc. By the age of 16 he had completely lost interest in ninja ranks and did not bother taking part in the chunin exams as he would rather focus on perfecting his skills.

Clan/Bloodline:Uchiha
[b]Rank:Genin
Village:Konohagakure
Starting Element:Fire
Weapons:5 Shuriken,20 Kunai,1 smoke bomb and 2 explosion tags

Sample RP:Ryuuga woke up one day full of energy although it was only 1 am and he had only 1 hour of sleep.He got out of his bed and washed his face.After wearing his Jounin equipment he looked out of his window staring at the bloody Uchiha compound.

Sorry but your Role Playing skills doesn't seem to be good enough to become a Jounin. Change your rank to genin.

Or could i just use a better sample?

No... I don't look rp skill only by watching the sample. Appearance, personality, history all of em and yours just seem to be too bad for Jounin.

Then could i just rework the entire thing?

Actually forget it im changing to genin

I would like to see more appearance description or at least a picture but oh well.

Also dislike personality's lack of description...

Write more history, like how did he pass his childhood, how he did in the academy. Why he is 16 and still a genin etc.

No one starts with Sharingan, not even a Kage so delete the thing under Extra.


I so dislike a fact beginners being a Uchiha...

Fine im doing that now

Remove second element, including the sharingan.

So i just have fire?

I removed my lightning and sharingan already so hurry up and approve this please?

Approved

Remember that you only get E-Rank jutsus at start so don't use any jutsus in rp topics before you have trained them.